2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch. 
Most importantly from my last pitch was the attire, my outfit for the last video was the most clear criticism. I was really surprised with how much I moved in comparison to others, I don't realize how much I move my hands when I get nervous. Also the speed of my last pitch was way too fast, some parts were slightly hard to understand.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
This time around I made sure to wear a jacket which was a huge improvement. I also made sure to keep my hands planted in front of me while speaking. This change allowed for the pitch to be less distracting. Lastly I didn't read as quickly which allowed for the more important points to be emphasized.